Awesome pixels man. I feel, maybe, that the legs are too symmetrical, and they create this "diamond" shape that might not be helping in conveying perspective. It's not a bad thing on its own, but I don't feel like is in the same vein as the rest of the piece. Like it feels a bit more abstract, or maybe bidimensional, while the rest has more volume.
Also, the vertical line of the square goes right through the middle of this diamond shape, and that is also making it more static.
Good thing he dropped that bottle.
Really interesting experimentation! I don't quite understand the left part of the composition (although that doesn't really matter to me as it looks interesting) but I don't think covering a side of her face is helping the composition, the reading of the character and expression. The color of that yellow thingy it´s too similar to the background, it´s shape it´s too regular and parallel to the left triangle. There's an interesting play with triangles in the composition going on and I think that is not adding to it. The anatomy doesn't feel very held together, as in that you have achieved a very structured, 3D drawing in some part of the body and in others, like the torso and the arm and feet, kind of falls apart. I don't mean that it HAS to have structure, but at least it should be supported by the composition and tied together in some other way, and I don't feel like that's happening. The feet, hand and shadow are not really doing it for me, they feel bland.
BUT, I have to say I like it, it has punch. Good job :)
Wo! Nice palette and design!
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